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Just decided redo this page for the hell of it
it has been sitting in my head way to much so i said "fuck it i am gonna do it"
don't ask me if i am gonna redo the other pages, that information is not yet to be discussed

well, anyways, there is a bit more happening in this page, a little
Hyena's design was tweaked, and such and blah blah blah blah blha
worked my ass of on the background
blah blah blah blah blah blah
hooray everybody

feel free to compare peoples: [link]



character and comic (c) ME and only me
don't use, trace, steal or whatever

no one word comments please


EDIT: Sorry for the edit, but I wanted to change the dialouge and the speech bubbles, but my dumbass didn't save a non bubble version so i had to do the shading all over again.

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:iconwhitewingeddemon:
nice, the dialouge work better, and i like the layout

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Zenin: AT EASE, SOLIDER. Kint: BUT MA'AM, IT TOOK ME FIVE MINUTES TO STAND AT ATTENTION
:iconshiina-mako-chan:
Spectacular! It IS even better!!

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If you want to find love, let it go like a dove. If it comes back, then it is true love at last.

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:icontgrsam:
This is fantastic! Super amazing! I love the redo sooooo much! Especially the Rapier, thing!
Plus, the layout is so much more, convincing, then the other one!
The backgrounds are awesome, such as those coolio trees.
Plus, need I have to say, Hyena actually looks pretty damned cool in this page! I love the floppy ear, added to his look!


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* The best artist in the world, yo.
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I am the Sam. =D
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:icondomisonic:
And someone said they were just re-doing the COVER, and was vehemently against redoing any of the PAGES...
funny. better paneling and flow in this version though.

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like a fox bandit ona stick!!
:iconxashleymx:
don't make fun of me man
i couldn't help it xD
:iconwolfandlupe:
Nice, both are, but I like how Hyena hasn't just appeared behind Valentine without being seen earlier in this version.

(Panel six is loooooooooooooove.)

And Valentine's stretched out/sitting up poses give her more... "thereness" ( *whacked* ), nice.

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Sometimes you just have to freaking suck it up and move on.
:icondomisonic:
Well, i could always go "Your backgrounds suck!" but that wouldn't be funny, now would it lol

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like a fox bandit ona stick!!
:iconxashleymx:
i don't think it is a good idea to say around here xD
:iconxashleymx:
i know, in the old one he just appears out of nowhere
without when showing how mysterious he is supposed to be before he introduces himself
thanks
:iconmisblondey:
I like the old one a lot, but this is also really well done!! I like how this sort of turned out more sereous, and the new BGs and anatomy has improved very much :) I think the redo and original are two different styles of the begining. Its also kool to notice that the characters act different in this version, it kind of resembles the personality change uv probably went through all this time. Anyways, the comic is coming out great!

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